Formal letter (exam)

C/Nàpols

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

LIDL

C/Doctor Pagès

08922

20th April 2016

Dear Manuela Díaz,

I am writing to complain about the amount of food that you throw away instead of giving it to charities.

While I was in the establishment I heard some customers talking about how much food you throw away every day and I needed to check it. For that reason, I waited until you closed the supermarket and I was appalled by the amount of unsold food that you could donate to charities. 

If I had known that fact, I wouldn't have bought here and I can assure you that more customers share my feeling.

I would be very grateful if you could help those people such as homeless people giving them your unsold food and if you need workers, you could hire some of them and help them with a salary.

I look forward hearing from you in a very near future.

Yours faithfully,

Maria.

Formal letter (corrected)

Condis
c/ Perú
Santa Coloma de Gramenet 
08921

                                                                                                                                                 Marina Bel

c/ Santa Eulalia

08921

20th April

Dear sir/madame,

I amb writing to complain about the huge quantity of food that you throw away every night just because it is unsold. 

I am appalled by the kilos of useful food that are been thrown away. There are lots of homeless people in our city that would be grateful if your firm could give this insane quantity of food to them. Furthermore, I find truely ashaming that while other people is starving, you throw away lots of food just because it is unsold. And I can assure that others share my feelings. 

Mainly, I would be very grateful if you could donate the food to charities for homeless people instead of throwing it all away. 

I look forward  to hearing from you in the very near future.

Yours sincerely, 

Marina Bel Mora  

Formal letter (exam correction)

St. Lluís Street

St. Coloma de Gramenet

08921

20 April of 2016

Local supermarket
Pallaresa Street
St. Coloma de Gramenet
08922

Dear Sir / Madame,

I am writing to complain about your politic of throwing food that can be unsold.

There are many people in need in our city, some of them homeless, that need our help. I was appalled when I discover that your supermarket throws away unsold food to charities for homeless people because some food is still in good conditions and it can be eaten.

I can assure that many other people share my feelings and I will start a campaign and collect signatures to prove it.

I would be grateful if you could take my suggestion in consideration and help charities and homeless people.

I hope to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully,

Laura Ávila

Formal letter [exam correction]

Hodaifa Belouafi Bakhat

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

Callin Street

08921

20 april of 2016

Manufacturer X

Ban Street

87591

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the personal who is working in your factories. I know that you are using child labour to produce your clothes, and it is so inhuman.

First of all, you are obtaining profit with this child because they do not have studies and you know that if you offer to them a little quantity of money for work and explote then a lot of hours they will accept because they do not have any other offer.

On the other hand, it is that they would not have work if you do not have contracted them, and now they are winning money to help their families with the house costs.

In conclusion, I want to advise you that if those child do not earn more money I will report your business and then the authorities will close your production process.

I hope that you will considerate my complain and now I will be expecting the changes about this.

Yours faithfully.

Hodaifa Belouafi Bakhat.