Formal letter [exam correction]

Hodaifa Belouafi Bakhat

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

Callin Street

08921

20 april of 2016

Manufacturer X

Ban Street

87591

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the personal who is working in your factories. I know that you are using child labour to produce your clothes, and it is so inhuman.

First of all, you are obtaining profit with this child because they do not have studies and you know that if you offer to them a little quantity of money for work and explote then a lot of hours they will accept because they do not have any other offer.

On the other hand, it is that they would not have work if you do not have contracted them, and now they are winning money to help their families with the house costs.

In conclusion, I want to advise you that if those child do not earn more money I will report your business and then the authorities will close your production process.

I hope that you will considerate my complain and now I will be expecting the changes about this.

Yours faithfully.

Hodaifa Belouafi Bakhat. 

Formal Letter

Natan Alan Jewelers                                                                                          

3333, Bristol                                                                                  

Costa Mesa, California                                                                                                   

                                                                                                                                          
Prat de la Riba Avenue
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
 08921

 6th April 2016

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are writing to complain about your latest advertisement published in your new adverstising campaign. 

We find the advertisement strongly offensive and nonsense, because it is sexist and it promotes male chauvinism. We also think that this kind of advertisement shouldn't appear in adverstising campaigns anymore, because of its discriminatory message. We are extremely appalled by the content of your campaing and we can assure you that lots of others Natan Alan's jewelry customers share our feelings.

We hope that your firm will change the thematic of the advertisements and we will be very grateful if you could remove this one. Actually, we certainly think that if you stop publishing advertisements such as this one, you will increase your sales, because lots of customers have stopped buying Natan Alan's jewels. 
We would be very grateful if you could send us a refund soon. 

We look forward to hearing from you in the very near future. 

Yours sincerely, 

Marina Bel and Hodaifa Belouafi

Formal letter

A good person is...

For me, a good person is:

- a person whose objective is the peace.
- a person who love everybody.
- a person who do his effort to help the others.

WHO I ADMIRE?

The person who I admire is Danny Macaskill. He's a professional rider of cycling and who won the champion of cycling last year. Danny Macaskill has a lot of videos doing tricks in a lot of modalities. But I admire his videos of mountain bike, because I practice downhill in mountain bike.

There is one of the best videos os him.

Writting exam - Rewritted and corrected

Mobile phones- a blessing or a curse. Discuss.

Hodaifa Belouafi Bakhat

Nowadays, everybody has a mobile phone, not only for calls, everyone uses mobile phones to use applications which make their life better (calculate, take photos…).

On one hand, all of us know that the times are changing and technology is growing at the same time. So today we have a lot of screens that make our life easier. It’s a good thing because we can connect with another person, friend or family instantly; as a result the mobile phones become very vicious.

On the other hand, we are growing in technology, but, as a result, we depend on it. All of us do the basic tasks and calculations with a mobile phone, and consequently we lose the capacity to do this without mobile phone (situation of dependence). I think that is a bad habit that we have to change.

To sum up, I hope that mobile phones are perfect to the society where we live, but we don’t have to make a dependence on it, because finally we will lose our mind and technology will think for us.

Tangier Albert and Hodaifa

Is the Internet bad for young people?

It is now easier than ever to access the internet, whether you are using a computer, phone or tablet. There is no doubt that many young people are spending more and more time online, with both positive and negative consequences.

One advantage of the internet is that young people can do research for their schoolwork and homework. This often helps teenagers to widen their knowledge and improve their grades. Another positive aspect of the internet is that people can practice foreign languages by chatting to friend in other countries. This is also a good way of keeping in touch with friends and family around the world.

On the other hand, there are also negative consequences. Some young people become addicted to online gaming and this can mean that they waste too much time playing games. This can have a negative effect on their schoolwork, the amount of exercise they get and their social lives. In addition, excessive internet use can mean that some young people hardly talk to their families because they are always on the computer.

To sum up, spending time on the internet can have a negative impact on young people, but it also has many advantages. Personally, I think the internet access outweigh the dangers. However, we should be careful not to use the internet excessively. 

Opinion essay corrected

Report about the crashes with cyclists

The aim of this report is to show how the car drivers see the cyclists. 

We will see if the drivers see the cyclists like a normal “vehicle” on 

the road or only like persons, then I will make recommendations to 

the cyclists.

As we know, the road is dangerous if we go fast, and we know too 

that the cars hate the cyclists. The guilt is to the both sides because 

the cars don’t give importance to cyclists and cyclists sometimes 

don’t wear fluorescent clothing and lights. 

Other factor is the license car, the car drivers know all the signals 

and normative circulation while the cyclists (not all of them) only 

know the stop signal and the traffic light. I think it’s important to 

cyclists to know some signals and normative circulation for prevent 

crashes or problems. 

In conclusion, I hope that the guilt is to both of them. Cyclists for no 

wear sometimes the fluorescent clothing and for no know the 

normative circulations, and the car drivers for not drive carefully 

when they see a cyclist or group of cyclist. My recommendation to 

cyclists is to wear fluorescent clothing and add lights to the bike.

3 true, 1 false

- Yesterday I was studying.

- I have eight teen years old. 

- I have never broke any bone. 

- In my family we are six persons.