Formal letter examen correction

c/ America nº 3 2º 4ª

Sevilla (Spain)

014374

Pssg. Mossen Jauem Gordi nº 4 1º 3ª

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

Dear Mr Jones,

I am writing to complain about your workers, because they are children and they work a lot of time without winning a lot of money.

Firstly I want to say that this is illigal and inmoral. This isn't fair because these children, have to stay in the school, learning, playing and enjoying their lives.

In general nobody should work in this conditions, but in this case about the children, which they have all the time for growing up, it is sadder.

Another thing is: you do not pay big quantities of money and I think taht this is inloyal.

In my point of view, you should look a solution for your workers, because they need most live quality and study,

 Thanks for you attention and I hope answers and changes in your factory.

Clara Salinas

Formal letter

Pssg.  Mossèn Jaume Gordi,4

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

6th April 2016

Shopping centre Plaza Mar

Alcazar 78

Alicante

89764

Dear Maria José Espuch,

I am writing to complain about your advertising campaign which was published during the last summer sales. 

I feel strongly that your advertisment is completely sexist and against the basics principles about the equality race. 

Working or Studying

Nowadays in Spain is difficult to choose between working or study. Now we don't have work due to the economical crisis. If you do not have studies, this will be a problem because are needed to find any kind of job. As there are a lot of umpleoyed people, the competence is very hard. The people are very qualified.

By other hand, study is not so easy to do it, because is very expensive and the govern can not stop to change the sutdy program and rules.                                                                               However, if you have the oportunity to work in something that you like, this is a lucky. In the opposite side, to have a bad work is very borried and hopeless.                                             In general, in Spain the salary is very low and this is other problem because, although you can have a job, probably you do not archieve your goals as, rent a flat or buy a car.

Related to the studies, when you finish the degree in the university or othert kind of studies, it is very gratificate. Afther four or five years studing in the university, once you get the title, the feeling must be amazing, but, as everithing in the life, study neither is easy nor cheap until success the degree.

Under my point of view, firstly I prefer study and later working. I think that sacrify some years studing, although it is not easy, as I expalined before, will have a reward at the end. 

Working and studying is a good idea

Nowadays the young people, they don't have luck to choose studying or working, because in Spain now, is very difficult working and studying is very expensive, and the students have problems to do both things. If you do one thing is difficult, but do both at the same time, how will be?

However, If you do the two things, you might not have time to do it correctly and you will lose time and money. A different option is working and studying and controlate the situation and you can do the two activities.

It seems to me that, usally the students we need more time, dedication... for doing exams, homeworks, projects... and all these but, if we doing more things as for example work, we can't do all things careful and very well.

With this in mind, if the people need to work for paid the university, my recomendation is that they should work at the weekend, so that they have free time during the week.