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c/ America nº 3 2º 4ª

Sevilla (Spain)

014374

Pssg. Mossen Jauem Gordi nº 4 1º 3ª

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

Dear Mr Jones,

I am writing to complain about your workers, because they are children and they work a lot of time without winning a lot of money.

Firstly I want to say that this is illigal and inmoral. This isn't fair because these children, have to stay in the school, learning, playing and enjoying their lives.

In general nobody should work in this conditions, but in this case about the children, which they have all the time for growing up, it is sadder.

Another thing is: you do not pay big quantities of money and I think taht this is inloyal.

In my point of view, you should look a solution for your workers, because they need most live quality and study,

 Thanks for you attention and I hope answers and changes in your factory.

Clara Salinas

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C/Sant Joaquim, 57
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921

                                                        AV/Francesc Macià, 11

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

20 of April 2016

Dear Sir / Madam, 

I am writing to complain about the habit of throwing unsold food away that your supermarket has. 

With all due respect, there are many people that are having a very hard time and the food that you waste could be necessary for them. I accept that some of that food has passed the expiration date and the law forbids you to sell it. But, of course, it doesn't mean it can't be eaten!

I can assure you that a lot of people share my feelings and people without ressources would be very greatful if you could reconsider this and start giving the food to charities. 

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. 

Yours faithfully, 

Júlia Fas

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Perú, 26

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

Passeig de Potosí,2

Barcelona

08030

Dear Mr. Garrido:

My name is Clara Vega Galvez. I am contacting you to complain about their workers.

                                                                                                     

Firstly, the last month, I visited their shop in La Maquinista. A salesman, was kind and attentive, and I wanted information about the last IPHONE 6S, and he was explaining about the new iphone model.

I bought my new mobile, but when I had opened  the box, the model was not   I wanted. I was sure I asked about the NEW IPHONE 6 S, but the salesman gave me the IPHONE 6.

I had tried to speak with the shop’s manager but it had been impossible.

I would like  to change the mobile, because I think, that can be possible if I have my ticket, and I would like to point out I can pay the additional amount.

Finally, I hope your answer, please contact me if you require any further  information,  my telephone number is 662194040.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Clara Vega

Grand Street 68

Brooklyn, New York

W2 9T4

                        Mossen Camilo Rossell 70

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

8 April 2016

Dear Sir/Madame

I am writing to complain about the difference between your advertisements of hamburgers and the really ones that you cook in your restaurants.

Although I knew that cooking perfect hamburgers such as the ones that you announce is a bit difficult, I appalled when I looked the hamburger that I had asked. I accept that your workers have to work very fast and in stressful situations but they should try to do better the menus.

In addition the food that burgers have is very poor, there is too much bread.

I am sure that there are a lot of people who share my feelings and if they knew how your menus really are, they wouldn’t go to some of your restaurants.

I look forward to find an improvement in your menus in the very near future.

Yours faithfully,

Damià Campamà

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Natan Alan Jewelers                                                                                          

3333, Bristol                                                                                  

Costa Mesa, California                                                                                                   

                                                                                                                                          
Prat de la Riba Avenue
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
 08921

 6th April 2016

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are writing to complain about your latest advertisement published in your new adverstising campaign. 

We find the advertisement strongly offensive and nonsense, because it is sexist and it promotes male chauvinism. We also think that this kind of advertisement shouldn't appear in adverstising campaigns anymore, because of its discriminatory message. We are extremely appalled by the content of your campaing and we can assure you that lots of others Natan Alan's jewelry customers share our feelings.

We hope that your firm will change the thematic of the advertisements and we will be very grateful if you could remove this one. Actually, we certainly think that if you stop publishing advertisements such as this one, you will increase your sales, because lots of customers have stopped buying Natan Alan's jewels. 
We would be very grateful if you could send us a refund soon. 

We look forward to hearing from you in the very near future. 

Yours sincerely, 

Marina Bel and Hodaifa Belouafi

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                                                                                                                                     Institut Numancia 

                                                                                                                                 Av. Prat de la Riba  08921

Santa Coloma de Gramanet

6th April 2016

Burguer King                                                                                         

Paseo Lorenzo Serra 10, 08921 

Santa Coloma de Gramanet 

Barcelona

Dear Buguer King,

We are writing to complain about the advertisement of your firm. We  believe that the publicity shows a lack of respect towards women.

We are disgusted with the Burguer King advertisement because this is an atack to women. Women haven't been fighting for their rights since XIX century just to see that advertisement, which is offensive and male chauvinist. My God, this can't be tolerated, as feminists that we are, we also consider an offense to feminist cause, "the radical notion that consider that women are people". 

The men also fight for women rights and because of this we want to ask you to remove the advertisement.  If you don’t remove the advertisement we will take judicial measure.

We waiting that you remove the advertisement or possibly we will stop consuming your products.

Yours Faithfully,

Manuel and Sergi.

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Madison Avenue

657 Regent Street

London

W1 3QT

11 Francesc Macià Avenue

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

6 April 2016

Dear Sir / Madam, 

We are writing to complain about the sexist content of your advertisement, which has been published in your campaign in Australia this week. 

With all due respect, we still live in a misogynist society and these kind of adverts just make it worse. The fact that there is still misogynistic behaviour nowadays is something very alarming and we must do everything we can to stop it. If we want to achieve gender equality, you should cease making these disrespectful advertisements. 

Moreover, we are aware that this is not the first sexist advertisement that you release. We have found at least two other campaigns that are an offense to women. We accept that you are not able to change those adverts but we hope you can do something about the latest one and the ones that are coming, as many people share our feelings. 

We look forward to hearing from you in the near future, since this issue concernes us all. 

Yours faithfully, 

Júlia Fas and Laura Ávila

                         

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CANDY HOOVER ELECTRODOSMÉSTICOS S.A. Ahumategi bide s/n 20570 Bergara – Guipúzcoa –Spain 69 Singuerlin AVE. Santa Coloma de Gramenet 08924 6 April 2016 Dear Sir/Madam, We are writing this letter to complain about the sexist content of your Christmas advertisement, which was published in Lecturas Magazine. We like original advertisements but there are limits, and your advertisement breaks them all. We think these kind of advertisement could not be posted on any media because they categorize all women as the same prototype. In this case, your last advertisement, makes an attempt to the women rights, because it leads to believe that the only women’s purpose might be taking care of the house. We are conscious that this letter is useless for you, but if you do not retire this advertisement and you do not apologize to all people who have been offended, we will make a campaign against your company in the near future, it is up to you. Yours faithfully, Arnau Manubens and Marc Miñano.

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Pssg.  Mossèn Jaume Gordi,4

Santa Coloma de Gramenet

08921

6th April 2016

Shopping centre Plaza Mar

Alcazar 78

Alicante

89764

Dear Maria José Espuch,

I am writing to complain about your advertising campaign which was published during the last summer sales. 

I feel strongly that your advertisment is completely sexist and against the basics principles about the equality race.