Monday, May 9, 2016

Formal letter (exam)


C/Nàpols
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921
LIDL
C/Doctor Pagès
08922
20th April 2016

Dear Manuela Díaz,
I am writing to complain about the amount of food that you throw away instead of giving it to charities.

While I was in the establishment I heard some customers talking about how much food you throw away every day and I needed to check it. For that reason, I waited until you closed the supermarket and I was appalled by the amount of unsold food that you could donate to charities. 

If I had known that fact, I wouldn't have bought here and I can assure you that more customers share my feeling.

I would be very grateful if you could help those people such as homeless people giving them your unsold food and if you need workers, you could hire some of them and help them with a salary.

I look forward hearing from you in a very near future.

Yours faithfully,
Maria.


Monday, May 2, 2016

Formal letter (corrected)

Condis
c/ Perú
Santa Coloma de Gramenet 
08921
                                                                                                                                                 Marina Bel
c/ Santa Eulalia
08921

20th April
Dear sir/madame,

I amb writing to complain about the huge quantity of food that you throw away every night just because it is unsold. 

I am appalled by the kilos of useful food that are been thrown away. There are lots of homeless people in our city that would be grateful if your firm could give this insane quantity of food to them. Furthermore, I find truely ashaming that while other people is starving, you throw away lots of food just because it is unsold. And I can assure that others share my feelings. 

Mainly, I would be very grateful if you could donate the food to charities for homeless people instead of throwing it all away. 

I look forward  to hearing from you in the very near future.


Yours sincerely, 

Marina Bel Mora  

Formal letter examen correction

c/ America nº 3 2º 4ª
Sevilla (Spain)
014374

Pssg. Mossen Jauem Gordi nº 4 1º 3ª
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921

Dear Mr Jones,
I am writing to complain about your workers, because they are children and they work a lot of time without winning a lot of money.

Firstly I want to say that this is illigal and inmoral. This isn't fair because these children, have to stay in the school, learning, playing and enjoying their lives.

In general nobody should work in this conditions, but in this case about the children, which they have all the time for growing up, it is sadder.

Another thing is: you do not pay big quantities of money and I think taht this is inloyal.

In my point of view, you should look a solution for your workers, because they need most live quality and study,

 Thanks for you attention and I hope answers and changes in your factory.

Clara Salinas

Friday, April 29, 2016

Formal letter (exam correction)

St. Lluís Street
St. Coloma de Gramenet
08921

20 April of 2016

Local supermarket
Pallaresa Street
St. Coloma de Gramenet
08922

Dear Sir / Madame,

I am writing to complain about your politic of throwing food that can be unsold.

There are many people in need in our city, some of them homeless, that need our help. I was appalled when I discover that your supermarket throws away unsold food to charities for homeless people because some food is still in good conditions and it can be eaten.

I can assure that many other people share my feelings and I will start a campaign and collect signatures to prove it.

I would be grateful if you could take my suggestion in consideration and help charities and homeless people.

I hope to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully,

Laura Ávila

Thursday, April 28, 2016

Formal letter [exam correction]

Hodaifa Belouafi Bakhat
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
Callin Street
08921
20 april of 2016
Manufacturer X
Ban Street
87591

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the personal who is working in your factories. I know that you are using child labour to produce your clothes, and it is so inhuman.

First of all, you are obtaining profit with this child because they do not have studies and you know that if you offer to them a little quantity of money for work and explote then a lot of hours they will accept because they do not have any other offer.

On the other hand, it is that they would not have work if you do not have contracted them, and now they are winning money to help their families with the house costs.

In conclusion, I want to advise you that if those child do not earn more money I will report your business and then the authorities will close your production process.

I hope that you will considerate my complain and now I will be expecting the changes about this.

Yours faithfully.

Hodaifa Belouafi Bakhat. 

Wednesday, April 27, 2016

Formal letter

C/Sant Joaquim, 57
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921
                                                        AV/Francesc Macià, 11
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921
20 of April 2016
Dear Sir / Madam, 

I am writing to complain about the habit of throwing unsold food away that your supermarket has. 

With all due respect, there are many people that are having a very hard time and the food that you waste could be necessary for them. I accept that some of that food has passed the expiration date and the law forbids you to sell it. But, of course, it doesn't mean it can't be eaten!

I can assure you that a lot of people share my feelings and people without ressources would be very greatful if you could reconsider this and start giving the food to charities. 

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. 

Yours faithfully, 

Júlia Fas

Monday, April 11, 2016

Formal Letter


Perú, 26
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921
Passeig de Potosí,2
Barcelona
08030


Dear Mr. Garrido:


My name is Clara Vega Galvez. I am contacting you to complain about their workers.
                                                                                                     
Firstly, the last month, I visited their shop in La Maquinista. A salesman, was kind and attentive, and I wanted information about the last IPHONE 6S, and he was explaining about the new iphone model.
I bought my new mobile, but when I had opened  the box, the model was not   I wanted. I was sure I asked about the NEW IPHONE 6 S, but the salesman gave me the IPHONE 6.

I had tried to speak with the shop’s manager but it had been impossible.
I would like  to change the mobile, because I think, that can be possible if I have my ticket, and I would like to point out I can pay the additional amount.

Finally, I hope your answer, please contact me if you require any further  information,  my telephone number is 662194040.

I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,


Clara Vega

Friday, April 8, 2016

Grand Street 68
Brooklyn, New York
W2 9T4
                        Mossen Camilo Rossell 70
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921

8 April 2016
Dear Sir/Madame
I am writing to complain about the difference between your advertisements of hamburgers and the really ones that you cook in your restaurants.
Although I knew that cooking perfect hamburgers such as the ones that you announce is a bit difficult, I appalled when I looked the hamburger that I had asked. I accept that your workers have to work very fast and in stressful situations but they should try to do better the menus.
In addition the food that burgers have is very poor, there is too much bread.
I am sure that there are a lot of people who share my feelings and if they knew how your menus really are, they wouldn’t go to some of your restaurants.
I look forward to find an improvement in your menus in the very near future.
Yours faithfully,

Damià Campamà

Thursday, April 7, 2016

Formal Letter



Natan Alan Jewelers                                                                                          
3333, Bristol                                                                                  
Costa Mesa, California                                                                                                   


                                                                                                                                          
Prat de la Riba Avenue
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
 08921

 6th April 2016

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are writing to complain about your latest advertisement published in your new adverstising campaign. 

We find the advertisement strongly offensive and nonsense, because it is sexist and it promotes male chauvinism. We also think that this kind of advertisement shouldn't appear in adverstising campaigns anymore, because of its discriminatory message. We are extremely appalled by the content of your campaing and we can assure you that lots of others Natan Alan's jewelry customers share our feelings.

We hope that your firm will change the thematic of the advertisements and we will be very grateful if you could remove this one. Actually, we certainly think that if you stop publishing advertisements such as this one, you will increase your sales, because lots of customers have stopped buying Natan Alan's jewels. 
We would be very grateful if you could send us a refund soon. 

We look forward to hearing from you in the very near future. 

Yours sincerely, 

Marina Bel and Hodaifa Belouafi




Wednesday, April 6, 2016

Formal Letter


                                                                                                                                     Institut Numancia 
                                                                                                                                 Av. Prat de la Riba  08921
Santa Coloma de Gramanet
6th April 2016


Burguer King                                                                                         
Paseo Lorenzo Serra 10, 08921 
Santa Coloma de Gramanet 
Barcelona

Dear Buguer King,

We are writing to complain about the advertisement of your firm. We  believe that the publicity shows a lack of respect towards women.

We are disgusted with the Burguer King advertisement because this is an atack to women. Women haven't been fighting for their rights since XIX century just to see that advertisement, which is offensive and male chauvinist. My God, this can't be tolerated, as feminists that we are, we also consider an offense to feminist cause, "the radical notion that consider that women are people". 

The men also fight for women rights and because of this we want to ask you to remove the advertisement.  If you don’t remove the advertisement we will take judicial measure.

We waiting that you remove the advertisement or possibly we will stop consuming your products.

Yours Faithfully,

Manuel and Sergi.


























Formal letter

Madison Avenue
657 Regent Street
London
W1 3QT

11 Francesc Macià Avenue
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921

6 April 2016

Dear Sir / Madam, 

We are writing to complain about the sexist content of your advertisement, which has been published in your campaign in Australia this week. 

With all due respect, we still live in a misogynist society and these kind of adverts just make it worse. The fact that there is still misogynistic behaviour nowadays is something very alarming and we must do everything we can to stop it. If we want to achieve gender equality, you should cease making these disrespectful advertisements. 

Moreover, we are aware that this is not the first sexist advertisement that you release. We have found at least two other campaigns that are an offense to women. We accept that you are not able to change those adverts but we hope you can do something about the latest one and the ones that are coming, as many people share our feelings. 

We look forward to hearing from you in the near future, since this issue concernes us all. 

Yours faithfully, 

Júlia Fas and Laura Ávila


                         

FORMAL LETTER

FORMAL LETTER


CANDY HOOVER
ELECTRODOSMÉSTICOS S.A.

Ahumategi bide s/n
20570 Bergara – Guipúzcoa –Spain


69 Singuerlin AVE.
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08924


6 April 2016

Dear Sir/Madam,


We are writing this letter to complain about the sexist content of your Christmas advertisement, which was published in Lecturas Magazine.

We like original advertisements but there are limits, and your advertisement breaks them all. We think these kind of advertisement could not be posted on any media because they categorize all women as the same prototype. In this case, your last advertisement, makes an attempt to the women rights, because it leads to believe that the only women’s purpose might be taking care of the house.
We are conscious that this letter is useless for you, but if you do not retire this advertisement and you do not apologize to all people who have been offended, we will make a campaign against your company in the near future, it is up to you.

Yours faithfully,

Arnau Manubens and Marc Miñano.








      

Tuesday, April 5, 2016

Formal letter

Formal letter





Pssg.  Mossèn Jaume Gordi,4
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
08921
6th April 2016

Shopping centre Plaza Mar
Alcazar 78
Alicante
89764

Dear Maria José Espuch,
I am writing to complain about your advertising campaign which was published during the last summer sales. 
I feel strongly that your advertisment is completely sexist and against the basics principles about the equality race. 







Monday, April 4, 2016

A good person is...

For me, a good person is:

- a person whose objective is the peace.
- a person who love everybody.
- a person who do his effort to help the others.

Tuesday, March 29, 2016

       MY MARK THE THIRD  TERM:

     
      1. 50%   Exam unit 1,2,3,4 and 5      ( Grammar,vocabulary,reading  and listening (20%)
                                                       

                    Exam units 1,2,3,4,5 and 6 (  Grammar,vocabulary, reading and listening  (30%)  
                
                    
                      

      2. 20%  Writing unit 5    (a formal letter)  10%
                    Writing units 1 to 6   (one of the six formats we have done)  10%

      3. 30%    
                    Reading exams PAU (15%)
                    Listening exams PAU (15%)

   *Homework, attitude and class assistance will also be taken in consideration in your mark         
      
                   

     EXAM DATES:


    
      1. Tuesday 12th April exam units 1, 2 , 3, 4 and 5 (grammar, vocabulary, reading and listening)

2. Wednesday 13th April writing exam unit 5 a formal letter

      3. Monday 25th April (h/b) Listening and Reading PAU exam
4. Monday 9th May (h/b)  Final writing exam

      5. Tuesday 10th May exam units 1, 2 ,3, 4, 5 and 6  (grammar, vocabulary, reading and listening.

 

Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Who do I admire

A friend who I admire is Abby, I do not want to say her real name because her life is complicate and I do not want to people identificate her. By te time I met her we get along, nowadays we do not hang out as we used to. However, when I see he it is like the time had not passed by. Althought Abby is zounge4r than me she is taller than me. Her brown ezes go with her brown and really long hair. She has got a gymnastic body. The main reason whz I admire her is because se has been very strong during her whole life. She is really brave because she never gives up when she is in trouble. Furthermore she always smiling and laughing even she is sad. Abby is the most brave, strong ans funny girl I have ever met.

Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Who do I admire?

In this world there are some people that are always fighting to change things, speak up for the ones that can not do it and denounce illegalities and Jesus Blasco De Avellaneda is one of these people. Is a journalist from seventeen dedicated to denouncing the illegalities on the fence of Melilla

I admire Jesus Blasco de Avellaneda because he is a journalist who is not afraid to tell what really happens on the fence of Melilla

to been arrested several times for defending the human rights of immigrants. I really admire her because knowing that he can be arrested dares to show the illegalities on the fence of Melilla.

In this world more people missing as it because they care about the immigrants and not by those who have power.

Monday, March 14, 2016

A good person is...

A good person is, in my humble opinion, someone who helps not for their own profit, but because they want to help out of goodwill. A good person, also has in mind others will and tries to be grateful for the favours that receives.