Thursday, April 7, 2016

Formal Letter



Natan Alan Jewelers                                                                                          
3333, Bristol                                                                                  
Costa Mesa, California                                                                                                   


                                                                                                                                          
Prat de la Riba Avenue
Santa Coloma de Gramenet
 08921

 6th April 2016

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are writing to complain about your latest advertisement published in your new adverstising campaign. 

We find the advertisement strongly offensive and nonsense, because it is sexist and it promotes male chauvinism. We also think that this kind of advertisement shouldn't appear in adverstising campaigns anymore, because of its discriminatory message. We are extremely appalled by the content of your campaing and we can assure you that lots of others Natan Alan's jewelry customers share our feelings.

We hope that your firm will change the thematic of the advertisements and we will be very grateful if you could remove this one. Actually, we certainly think that if you stop publishing advertisements such as this one, you will increase your sales, because lots of customers have stopped buying Natan Alan's jewels. 
We would be very grateful if you could send us a refund soon. 

We look forward to hearing from you in the very near future. 

Yours sincerely, 

Marina Bel and Hodaifa Belouafi




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