Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Writting exam - Rewritted and corrected

Mobile phones- a blessing or a curse. Discuss.
Hodaifa Belouafi Bakhat

Nowadays, everybody has a mobile phone, not only for calls, everyone uses mobile phones to use applications which make their life better (calculate, take photos…).

On one hand, all of us know that the times are changing and technology is growing at the same time. So today we have a lot of screens that make our life easier. It’s a good thing because we can connect with another person, friend or family instantly; as a result the mobile phones become very vicious.

On the other hand, we are growing in technology, but, as a result, we depend on it. All of us do the basic tasks and calculations with a mobile phone, and consequently we lose the capacity to do this without mobile phone (situation of dependence). I think that is a bad habit that we have to change.


To sum up, I hope that mobile phones are perfect to the society where we live, but we don’t have to make a dependence on it, because finally we will lose our mind and technology will think for us.

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